UMBRELLA♥ part 1

“We held hands on that magic day, we were beautifully bonded as lovers,
The rain romantically fell, our heart shaped umbrellas served as our cover.” ~R~❤️

Some magic, some poetry, and begins an enchanting story.❤️

As the rain drenches the earth one evening,
City roads creek and groan.
Shivering, trembling, , I am running fast,
Finding my way through blazing horns.

though flashing cars offer me their sapphire seats,
I ignore their open doors.
Some call me foolish, some call me proud,
But I need their judgements no more.

So, alone I move on beneath the darkening skies,
Wishing I had someone to hold.
And as I stop to catch my breath , one blazing moment,
A magic draws me from across the road

I look up and see you standing there,
And my world momentarily stops.
Your face, your vibe feels so familiar,
Aren’t you the one I love to dream about?

The rain doesn’t seem to touch me anymore,
As your spell draws me in deep.
Only now do I see you are holding an umbrella,
Quietly wishing to share it with me.

Laughing I warn you I am a bit crazy,
In a line even spill my life’s story.
But you are still there, holding your umbrella,
Still Wishing to share it with me.

“Are you some Magician I dreamed into life?”,
I ask as I draw nearer.
Smiling you pull me close, into your warmth,
Covering me under your umbrella.

Too spell bound am I to say anything anymore,
As I feel your magic surround me.
And to the readers who want to know what happened next,
Well It is still an ongoing story.

©© Sona, 2018
All Rights Reserved.


103 thoughts on “UMBRELLA♥ part 1

  1. Wow, I almost feel like I was there while I was reading this. Great detail, description and I love the climate. Beautiful setting and how the two comes together, that’s magical and the rain makes it romantic in its own right.❤️. Fight for your dreams, no matter what occurs. Control your own pen in life, and you can write your own Happily Ever Afters🌹. What a beautiful story, and the fact that it’s an ongoing story, I’m loving it! Pure magic, and she didn’t seem crazy to me, they were both in the rain so they were both thinking the “sane”!😉

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    1. I am so glad you could picture the scene in your mind.❤️ And, what do you think about the quote placed right on top? Isn’t it gorgeous?😉 Yes, stories go on and on in the hearts of those who can feel them.🌹 Her story, we know now his however remains a mystery🌹🌹

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      1. Yeah, the scene is beautiful. And the quote on the top is magical and the story is enchanting😉, what a dynamic thing that is. I can feel that story, I don’t think his story is a mystery, he clearly wants her under his umbrella.🌹🌹

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      2. Hey, now you’re taking my lines❤️❤️😉. That was a touching statement, no wonder you have me hypnotized and smitten over you ❤️❤️❤️


      3. always my pleasure to teach someone so brainy😉🌹 and with regards to magic, well, you do seem to brighten my day and bring a smile upon my face and that’s something🌹♥️♥️♥️

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      4. Always a pleasure to learn from someone so brainy and beautiful and so well regarded in magic as well.❤️❤️❤️
        And truth be told, you do make me smile a lot too🌹❤️❤️❤️ thinking about you and the things you said😂😉


      5. Well, it was you who even discovered the magic in me. I didn’t even know it existed 😉♥️♥️ and needless to say, obviously I am thinking about you. You are so irresistible😉♥️♥️😂

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      6. I discovered the magic in you because you had awaken the magic in me😉❤️❤️❤️. So you’re thinking about me too, we’re on each other’s minds😉. I may be irresistible but you are simply irresistible😉❤️❤️❤️😂😘


      7. Haha! It’s coming along slowly but surely. Different crushes are easy to name off. I’m looking past that and thinking about my next post called “Will you Be”


      8. Yeah, I’m really looking forward to starting it. Who is the you in the title? The you is you of course 😉❤️. Did you need verification or did you have hunch😉


      9. Hahaha, breathtaking, and I knew you had a hunch. Yes, we barely know each other and we’re writing post inspired by each other, we are each other’s muses. The post aren’t about each other😉❤️❤️❤️❤️, okay, so they are😂😂. Yes, we’re writing post about each other.❤️❤️. What to do?


      10. Hahaha!!! Yes, I said we are crazy❤️❤️❤️ and it’s very fun!! Life is to serious, why should we be. The Enchantress and the Magician being insane in the rain.😉❤️❤️❤️


      11. Hahaha! Yeah, I was reading where you didn’t think you deserved it and I totally thought you did, I was thinking your writing is to great not to have her spotlighted. I’m glad she did spotlight you❤️❤️😉


  2. Ok, My Dear!!! Not fair – Foul!!! You have to at least let us know if this is real or fiction/fantasy??? Just an exquisite poem with the warmth and magic of love and meant to be?? Well, I guess we have to wait and see about that??? According to you? LOL! Bellissimo, Sona, Bellissimo!

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    1. . hahaha your comment make me laugh. And hey, do read the second part of the umbrella series. I have shared it on my blog as well. It was written by a very talented writer and I would love to know what you think of the story


    1. This is one of my old posts. In fact it’s sequel is written by Roy. I will be sharing it again soon. Hope you like it. Thank you once again there for your support. It means a lot 😘♥️😘


    1. Hahaha yes I was thinking that you are reading the posts in reverse order. Can’t imagine how it might have been. But I am glad you enjoyed it all. Fantasyland, yes that’s the best place. Thank you so so much for your kind words. Truly appreciate it.

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