In this enchanting night, beneath twinkling lights,
You spin me round and round.
My heart beats wild, I can’t help but smile,
As you lift me off the ground.

I look at you, all handsome heat,
Your love is the blessing I behold.
Wrapped in your arms, I feel so free,
As I live the love story my palms told.

We dance to our rhythm, just you and me,
Two hearts beating as one.
Those unpractised steps, fall so synchronously,
Oh darling! This is so much fun.

I know we will be fine, as the wind brushes my face,
And a miracle so plainly I see .
A million little stars are shining in the sky,
watching over you and me..

©© Sona, 2018
All Rights Reserved.


  1. I absolutely love, love, love this! Oh you told me you’d do this😉. It seems every line had to do with the title and the title itself was pure love. Taking me in your arms, lifting closer to the sky is so amazing. Under the stars, that spells love in so many ways, two hearts beating as one, you can’t get no closer than that! This was a lovely poem, I loved the rhyming, the flow and the ending was amazing.❤️. A million sparkling love stars in the sky!😉🌹. This was wonderful!! Thank you!

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    1. A million sparkling thank you for your beautiful comment. Yes, I told you I would and so I did. You know what, your comments always make me want to edit something or another in my poem haha! For example, here, I feel like editing the title to include the word sparkling 💖💖
      thanks again Roy🌹🌹

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      1. You’re so welcome, you are something else!❤️🌹. I loved it, you’re awesome. I’m gonna have to figure out something to edit in my poem one of these days.😉. Like Sparkling💫

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      2. When you write, the world stops. It stops, only to read, to think and to marvel at the way you portray such profound thoughts in your simple heart touching way. I suspect if you were to post almost every day like me, the world might just have a brain freeze!!!

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      3. Wow, I’m love that!! I may just have to pen some of that in my next post but I’m not sure I could put poetry in poetry. Your comment stopped time and blew my mind, made it’s mark and touched my heart. You are beyond amazing, I’m sure I’m not the only one who brain freezes when you post.❤️😉

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      4. I went back and read it too♥️♥️. I remember putting your quote in our poem I wrote for you “Stages of Love”😘. I love this conversation and so many others we’ve had😘😘♥️♥️

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  2. Wow…wow…wow…how beautiful it is…such a wonderful poem…😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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  3. Very deep and inspiring
    leaves the mind inquiring
    To whom you offer
    Such Poetic admirings

    Know that this lovely sentiment
    is most definately reciprocated
    Let’s unlift the veil where we dwell
    in the poetic pools
    of reciprocal affections
    using words as honorary confections

    Tasty !…yes our connection
    Is multifaceted and multidimensional
    Travelling phantoms
    From another lifetime
    I see you in this re-incarnation
    As a metaphorical Red carnation
    A rare breed indeed
    Thus the need to reintroduce myself

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